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Friday, February 25, 2011

Apple from the Apple Tree


This was our poem of the week. We are learning to make our reading sound like talking and to use expression. We had to practice using expression and make up actions to make our poem more interesting.

We think we can get better by not shouting, making our actions bigger and by all talking at the same speed.

Watch our video and tell us what you think by leaving a comment!
Posted by The Incredibles at 4:29 PM

5 comments:

  1. A.JFebruary 26, 2011 at 7:30 AM

    Cool poem! I like the clear voices and actions!

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  2. EllyFebruary 27, 2011 at 6:57 PM

    Hi Incredibles, I really enjoyed listening to your poem. Poetry is one of my favourite things. I thought that you did a really good job using expression and making your reading sound like talking. That is such a good goal - then it is interesting for the listener to listen to you! Keep up the good work.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2011 at 6:16 PM

    I loved watching your poem. What a great idea putting it on a video so everyone can watch.
    Louise (Gracies mum)

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  4. IlluminateMarch 1, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    Nice song The Incredibles. You did a good job of not shouting.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 1, 2011 at 2:21 PM

    That was great! I thought your expression was fantastic and I really liked your squirming! Poetry rocks eh! (Matthew's Mum)

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