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Tuesday, August 2, 2011

Tabitha's Holiday Story


Today Tabitha and all of the Incredibles did writing. We wrote about the holidays. This is Tabitha's story. She told us lots of information. She worked really hard to make it really interesting. We liked it when Tabitha said that Oscar was bored out of his mind. I liked the way she used the word celebrate because it has good detail (George). The word that is a bit interesting is fantastic (Sophie).

Kapia to mahi Tabitha!

4 comments:

  1. Wow Tabitha, I like your story. I like the fansy words that you used. I wish I could write like you.

    Sophie

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  2. Wow Tabitha, I really liked your incredible picture.

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  3. Great work Tabitha I wish I could do that

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  4. wow tabitha thats cool

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